Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, March 29, 2017

Writing 7: "Modern IT trends"

Your blogs: 
WRITING 7 - Modern IT technologies: 1000-2500 words; 9-12 paragraphs
WRITING 6 - Operating system  (7-8 paragraphs)
WRITING 5 - Networking (7-8 paragraphs)
WRITING 2,3,4 - Essays 2,3,4: 250 words (IELTS writing task II)  - 5 paragraphs
WRITING 1 - Essay 1: 150 words (Bar chart  - IELTS writing task I) 

  HELP to your WRITING 7:





Top 10 Technology Trends.  By David W. Cearley   Gartner, Inc.

Trend No. 1: The Device Mesh
The device mesh moves beyond the traditional desktop computer and mobile devices (tablets and smartphones) to encompass the full range of endpoints with which humans might interact. As the device mesh evolves, Gartner expects connection models to expand and greater cooperative interaction between devices to emerge. We will see significant development in wearables and augmented reality, especially in virtual reality.
            Trend No. 2: Ambient User Experience
All of our digital interactions can become synchronized into a continuous and ambient digital experience that preserves our experience across traditional boundaries of devices, time and space. The experience blends physical, virtual and electronic environments, and uses real-time contextual information as the ambient environment changes or as the user moves from one place to another.
Organizations will need to consider their customers' behavior journeys to shift the focus on design from discrete apps to the entire mesh of products and services involved in the user experience.
            Trend No. 3: 3D-Printing Materials
We'll see continued advances in 3D printing with a wide range of materials, including advanced nickel alloys, carbon fiber, glass, conductive ink, electronics, pharmaceuticals and biological materials for practical applications expanding into aerospace, medical, automotive, energy and the military.
Recent advances make it possible to mix multiple materials together with traditional 3D printing in one build. This could be useful for field operations or repairs when a specific tool is required and printed on demand. Biological 3D printing — such as the printing of skin and organs — is progressing from theory to reality; however, politicians and the public don't have a full understanding of the implications.
            Trend No. 4: Information of Everything
Everything surrounding us in the digital mesh is producing, using and communicating with virtually unmeasurable amounts of information. Organizations must learn how to identify what information provides strategic value, how to access data from different sources, and explore how algorithms leverage Information of Everything to fuel new business designs.
            Trend No. 5: Advanced Machine Learning
Advanced machine learning is what makes smart machines appear "intelligent" by enabling them to both understand concepts in the environment, and also to learn. Through machine learning a smart machine can change its future behavior. This area is evolving quickly, and organizations must assess how they can apply these technologies to gain competitive advantage.
            Trend No. 6: Autonomous Agents and Things
Advanced machine learning gives rise to a spectrum of smart machine implementations — including robots, autonomous vehicles, virtual personal assistants (VPAs) and smart advisors — that act in an autonomous (or at least semiautonomous) manner. This feeds into the ambient user experience in which an autonomous agent becomes the main user interface. Instead of interacting with menus, forms and buttons on a smartphone, the user speaks to an app, which is really an intelligent agent.
            Trend No. 7: Adaptive Security Architecture
The complexities of digital business and the algorithmic economy, combined with an emerging "hacker industry," significantly increase the threat surface for an organization. IT leaders must focus on detecting and responding to threats, as well as more traditional blocking and other measures to prevent attacks.
            Trend No. 8: Advanced System Architecture
The digital mesh and smart machines require intense computing architecture demands to make them viable for organizations. They'll get this added boost from ultra-efficient-neuromorphic architectures. Systems built on graphics processing units (GPUs) and field-programmable gate-arrays (FPGAs) will function more like human brains that are particularly suited tos be applied to deep learning and other pattern-matching algorithms that smart machines use. FPGA-based architecture will allow distribution with less power into the tiniest Internet of Things (IoT) endpoints, such as homes, cars, wristwatches and even human beings.
            Trend No. 9: Mesh App and Service Architecture
The mesh app and service architecture are what enable delivery of apps and services to the flexible and dynamic environment of the digital mesh. This architecture will serve users' requirements as they vary over time. It brings together the many information sources, devices, apps, services and microservices into a flexible architecture in which apps extend across multiple endpoint devices and can coordinate with one another to produce a continuous digital experience.
            Trend No. 10: Internet of Things Architecture and Platforms
IoT platforms exist behind the mesh app and service architecture. The technologies and standards in the IoT platform form a base set of capabilities for communicating, controlling, managing and securing endpoints in the IoT. The platforms aggregate data from endpoints behind the scenes from an architectural and a technology standpoint to make the IoT a reality.

Friday, March 17, 2017

Connecting words

https://www.dlsweb.rmit.edu.au/lsu/content/4_writingskills/writing_tuts/linking_LL/linking3.html
http://writing.wisc.edu/Handbook/Transitions.html

http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/en/grammar/conjunctions.htm    (жишээ  / grammar )

http://www.smart-words.org/linking-words/
It is essential to understand how Linking Words, as a part of speech, can be used to combine ideas in writing - and thus ensure that ideas within sentences and paragraphs are elegantly connected - for the benefit of the reader. This will help to improve your writing (e.g. essay, comment, summary (scientific) review, (research) paper, letter, abstract, report, thesis, etc.). 
It is also fundamental to be aware of the sometimes subtle meaning of these "small" words within the English language.

http://education.wichita.edu/caduceus/examples/essay_student/transitions.htm

LINKING WORDS and PHRASES:
http://library.bcu.ac.uk/learner/writingguides/1.33.htm

You can use words or short phrases which help to guide your reader through your writing, and to link sentences, paragraphs and sections both forwards and backwards.Try to use a variety of expressions, particularly in longer pieces of writing.
The best way to "get a feel" for these words is through your reading. Most textbooks and articles are well-written and will probably include a lot of these cohesive devices. Note how they are used and try to emulate what you have read.


ListingGiving examplesGeneralising
first, second, thirdfor examplein general
first, furthermore, finallyfor instancegenerally
to begin, to concludeas follows:on the whole
nextthat isas a rule
Reinforcementin this casefor the most part
alsonamelyin most cases
furthermorein other wordsusually
moreoverResult/consequenceHighlighting
what is moresoin particular
in additionthereforeparticularly
besidesas a result/consequenceespecially
above allaccordinglymainly
as well (as)consequentlyReformulation
in the same waybecause of this/thatin other words
not only ... but alsothusrather
Similarityhenceto put it more simply
equallyfor this/that reasonExpressing an alternative
likewiseso thatalternatively
similarlyin that caserather
correspondinglyunder these circumstanceson the other hand
in the same wayDeductionthe alternative is
Transition to new pointthenanother possibility would be
now,in other wordsContrast
as far as x is concernedin that caseinstead
with regard/reference tootherwiseconversely
as for ...this implies that ...on the contrary
it follows thatif so/notin contrast
turning toStating the obviousin comparison
SummaryobviouslyConcession (sth unexpected)
in conclusionclearlyhowever
to concludenaturallyeven though
in briefof coursehowever much
to summariseas can be expectednevertheless
overallsurelystill
thereforeafter allyet

Saturday, March 11, 2017

Homework

1. Essays in your blogs  - deadline 22 / III ;

Параграфуудын эхэнд TAB дарж догол мөр гаргах 
(Нэг үг бичих зай орхих)
Параграфуудын хооронд зай авах

Эхлэлийн параграфын сүүлийн өгүүлбэрийг тодруулах 
(Thesis statement)
Үндсэн параграфуудын эхний өгүүлбэрийг тодруулах
(Topic sentence)
Төгсгөлийн өгүүлбэрт өөр үгээр давтсан тезисийг тодруулах
(Paraphrasing !)







2. New words in your blogs: 3-6 meanings !



Thursday, March 9, 2017

HW: Writing

Блогт пост оруулахдаа нэр өгөх
Эссений гарчгийг заавал бичих

Wednesday, March 1, 2017

Vocabulary

VOCABULARY : Brainstorming  / Mindmapping ...

English -English dictionary /
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Allocation - noun ;  хуваалт, хуваарилалт, байршуулалт 1) (computer science) the assignment of particular areas of a magnetic disk to particular data or instructions; 
2) a share set aside for a specific purpose; 3) the act of distributing by allotting or apportioning; distribution according to plan; "the apportionment of seats in the House of Representatives is based on the relative population of each state"
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The Session Initiation Protocol (SIP) is a signalling communication protocol,  widely used for controlling multimedia communication sessions such as voice and video calls over Internet Protocol  (IP) networks.
-Toll (telecommunications), refers to connection charges, for instance note Trunk vs. Toll charging and toll-free telephone numbers.

http://www.thesaurus.com/


Saturday, February 25, 2017

Writing 4

Unit 4. Lesson 4.

Write an essay on the following topic:
A lot of people say about the effects of technology on communication
Do you agree or disagree
Write at least 250 words. 

Argumentative essay / agree, disagree/. Usually have 5 paragraphs. It is debatable, controversial essay.
- Introduction: 3-4 sentences /don’t give any of your answers in the introduction/
- Paragraph 1: reason №1.
            My main argument is …………..                     (нотолгоо)
- Paragraph 2: reason №2.
            My next argument is …………..                      (нотолгоо)
- Paragraph 3: Why people disagree - support
            However, many others would argue and disagree that ……………………
I understand their point of view, but I can not agree with it. I still feel that ...
- Conclusion: open your mind again. 2 sentences.
            In a nutshell, I understand that everything in this world has its own good
or bad points. Nonetheless, I would still make a stand (байр суурь) and agree that.......

The language of Education and research
Academic courses
Assessment, course, examination, module, practice, project, report, semester, topic
Research
Nouns: aim, article, category, class, closed, question, (anecdotal) evidence, experiment, evaluation, interview, literature, search, pilot project, questionnaire, respondent, sample, survey, theory, volunteer
Adjective: random, systematic
Verbs: carry out, evaluate, investigate, prove, select, suggest



 http://www.buowl.boun.edu.tr/students/types%20of%20essays/ARGUMENTATIVE%20ESSAY.htm


 Argumentative essay
Definition: In this kind of essay, we not only give information but also present an argument with the PROS (+supporting ideas) and CONS (-opposing ideas) of an argumentative issue. We should clearly take our stand and write as if we are trying to persuade an opposing audience to adopt new beliefs or behavior. The primary objective is to persuade people to change beliefs that many of them do not want to change.


Organization: All argumentative topics have PROs and CONs. Before starting writing, it is imperative to make a list of these ideas and choose the most suitable ones among them  for supporting and refuting.

       

There are three possible organization patterns:    

Pattern 1:

        Thesis statement:
        PRO idea 1
        PRO idea 2

        CON(s) + Refutation(s)

         Conclusion



Pattern 2:
        Thesis statement:
        CON(s) + Refutation(s)

        PRO idea 1

        PRO idea 2

        Conclusion


Pattern 3:

        Thesis statement:

        CON idea 1                ----->        Refutation (няцаалт)

        CON idea 2                ----->        Refutation

        CON idea 3                ----->        Refutation

        Conclusion

Language: Signposts gain importance in the argumentative essay. They enable the readers to follow our arguments easily.



When pointing out opposing arguments (CONs):

Opponents of this idea claim / maintain that …            

Those who disagree / are against these ideas may say / assert that …

Some people may disagree with this idea.



When stating specifically why they think like that:

The put forward this idea because …

They claim that … since …



Reaching the turning point:

However,

but

On the other hand,



When refuting the opposing idea, we may use the following strategies:

  • compromise but prove that their argument is not powerful enough:

They have a point in thinking like that.

To a certain extent they are right.



  • completely disagree:

After seeing this evidence, there is no way we can agree with what they say.



  • say that their argument is irrelevant to the topic:

What we are discussing here is not what they are trying to prove.

Their argument is irrelevant.

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